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KH2 - Kairi - Valor Form

Published: Nov 28, 2006

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Description

Thanks to a bit of inspiration, a nice pose I saw in one deviation, and the KH OST playing in the background I finally managed to come up with a deviation (after a looooong time.. 6++ months).

It's supposed to be Kairi in Kingdom Hearts 2 wielding Oathkeeper and True to Heart (??)

Made a lot of mistakes with this one, the ff. being the obvious...

- Anatomy
- Perspective (anatomy + pose + opacity)
- Garment Physics (pose + Kairi's mini skirt)

Despite that I'm still pretty happy with the dev.

Used: mongol no. 1 pencil
Time: approx. 4 hours

comments and critique are much appreciated.
(if you happen to know how to render the pose "better" do enlighten me)

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<begin Fanboy rave>
I know I'm a few days late, but about 3 days ago Dead Fantasy II came out. Watch here: [link] and it will be clear (before watching Dead Fantasy II, I strongly recommend you see Dead Fantasy I first).XD

Kairi <3<3<3
<end Fanboy rave>

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catlikeacat

Jun 29, 2009

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First of all, I really like this picture. but there are small problems with it.

The rod on her flowery keyblade is too thin, it needs to be thicker so it'll look sturdier. It should also be a little bit longer between the handle and the flowers. the handle should a bit smaller.

Her right leg is bending a little bit unnaturally near the bottom. It should be ajust a smidge straighter. Same with the same area on the opposite leg- just needs to be a little bit straighter.

Also, her left foot should be a little bit bigger to match her other. One last tiny note- her hair is just a bit too long.