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Well, it was bound to happen.

Since I somehow ended up naming the last fanart of Kairi wielding 2 keyblades as valor form, went ahead and tried out master form.

Though not much, there are some improvements over the last one. Tried to keep the proportion closer to Kairi's this time, although I still had trouble with the face/eyes.

Keyblades are "Circle of Life" (main-hand) and "Follow the Wind" (off-hand).

Dev took several days to make since I kept going back and forth with some of the elements. Face alone went through 5+ diff. renditions. Ultimately decided to attempt a pout/annoyed look after agreeing with several friends that the original expression looked too generic.

Admittedly I got lazy when I got to the keyblades, shoes, and background. And when you get lazy, you get more errors (like perspective, proportions, light/shadow, etc)

Hopefully, I'll do much better on my next attempt(s) (whenever that is).

As always, comments, suggestions, constructive critiques are much appreciated.

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:iconcramcomplex:
Have you tried using textures like pencil sketches as a kind of overlay for the weapons?

Nice effect on the blur of the top weapon.

Proportion looks too twisted.

But overall good work on it.

Better get a tablet and lets see what you can do with it. XD
:iconvagrant-angel:
Yeap, didn't like it, otherwise would've used my original pencils.

Proportion twisted... hmm... how twisted... or, to be more precise where? Ised a ref. for the pose and exaggerated it a bit.

As for getting a tablet... LOLz, will see. For now will have to make do with mouse coloring. >_<
:iconvariis:
Please, take my internetz. I'm not worthy.
:icond-akuma:
I love this pose. It looks like she's going to jump over a pole like you see in gym or... whatever. Her face matches well, I think. Like she's seriously determined.
Gawd, now I want to draw Kairi... D:

Is that a hint of panty I see?

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:iconcramcomplex:
her torso twist is a bit too much for me...prolly its that...but yeah too much twist
:iconcamilliette:
This is pretty much... ridiculously awesome! I think Kairi looks so kick-ass here. Great job!! :)

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:iconm1a2tanker:
That's awesome. :D She looks good, very fierce and tough in Master Form. Sweet ten ways to Sunday. :D

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:iconmurasame-kei:
Are fanboy squeals welcome here? ;o;

I think its just me, but her two arms dont seem to match the other's thickness. o.o
:iconvagrant-angel:
Looks like I missed the foreshortening on the off arm. Something I've been having with difficulty lately.
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Thanks. Although I can't help but feel the bg and sfx could use a lot more work.

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